Excellent until the very last bit ... I'd have preferred Katrina go on in the next story to keep crushing Wang's enemies, but never Wang herself ... don't like the victim wanting it ... but having someone in that role works really well. The buildup with Wang going from timid to excited was really well done because you kept making me wonder if she was going to feel concerned for Summer or say "okay that's enough," but she kept wanting more, not relenting but not being all out vengeful. Very well done.
I absolutely love your descriptions and phrases, they're some of the best. Keep it coming.
I absolutely love your descriptions and phrases, they're some of the best. Keep it coming.