This is my first time writing so constructive criticism would be appreciated.
Squash The Skinny
Tira was a young girl looking for a job. As soon as she hit 17 sheââ,¬â,,¢d decided to start making her own money. She had already applied at dozens of stores but they refused to hire her if she didnââ,¬â,,¢t change her appearance. She was pale, wore lots of black, had a couple facial piercings had shoulder length black hair, and was slightly bony. Tira decided she wouldnââ,¬â,,¢t change herself for $7.50 an hour. Thankfully, One store she applied to was very promising: Torn, a gothic plus-size womenââ,¬â,,¢s clothing store. She thought her 5ââ,¬â,,¢5, 90-pound self would be shunned upon entry, but the interviewer was very friendly. Janet, the interviewer, was 5ââ,¬â,,¢7 and 230-ish. Not too big but Tira noticed her shirt was a tad too small and struggled to conceal her belly. Tira was used to seeing fat female flesh. Her roommate, Mary, would often parade around their apartment in her underwear. Tira could see every roll of fat on her 300-pound body. Maryââ,¬â,,¢s belly hang low enough that if you saw her from the front you couldnââ,¬â,,¢t tell if she was wearing panties or not. At first Tira was uncomfortable and slightly grossed out, but she grew to tolerate it.
Janet told Tira the she seemed very good for the job and that she starts tomorrow . On the drive home she though about her coworkers and customers reactions. All the glares sheââ,¬â,,¢d get for being the skinny girl. ââ,¬Å"Theyââ,¬â,,¢re just jealous.ââ,¬Â She chuckled to herself as she pulled into her parking spot. As she walked in she noticed Mary had a new pair of silk underwear. At 5ââ,¬â,,¢6 Mary was just an inch taller than Tira, but over 3 times her weight.
ââ,¬Å"Whatââ,¬â,,¢s the point in buying all those clothes if youââ,¬â,,¢re just gonna walked around in your underwear?ââ,¬Â Tira asked entering the kitchen. Mary then bumped her ass into Tira and leaned against the wall, her ass and back fat pressing into Tiraââ,¬â,,¢s stomach and chest.
ââ,¬Å"Well, seeing how Iââ,¬â,,¢m the only one paying rent here, I think Iââ,¬â,,¢m allowed to dress comfortably.ââ,¬Â She said while lightly grinding her ass into Tiraââ,¬â,,¢s stomach. ââ,¬Å"Not for longââ,¬Â, Tira managed to gasp. Mary quickly set Tira free. ââ,¬Å"Oh really? Whereââ,¬â,,¢d you get a job at?ââ,¬Â She asked. ââ,¬Å"Torn. They said I would do very well.ââ,¬Â Tira said between breaths. Mary then burst into laughter.
ââ,¬Å"Yeah, yeah, skinny girl working at a fat girl store, shut up.ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"I used to work there, ya know.ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"Really? Is it a nice place?ââ,¬Â Tira asked.
ââ,¬Å"Oh yeah, The girls there will just love youââ,¬Â Mary said with a mischievous look on her face.
ââ,¬Å"Whatââ,¬â,,¢s That look for?ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"On nothing. Good night squisheeââ,¬Â Mary said with a chuckle.
Tira thought about what she said, than went to her own bedroom to sleep.