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        It was another long, boring day I faced at work.  Biding my time at the gift shop in the lobby of a Holiday Inn was my source of income for the majority of the week.  Today was an ordinary Saturday, working my usual 4-12 shift.  Saturday was the busiest night of the week at the hotel.  There was a party tonight in the reception hall like every Saturday.  There were a lot of people there that would often come into the gift shop to but something.  Some of them bored, some of them drunk, but none of them could compare to this woman. 
   It was around 9 pm when I saw a figure enter the store from the corner of my eye.  She was easily the biggest woman Iââ,¬â,,¢ve ever seen - and hands down the most beautiful as well.  She was around my height, 5' 8'ââ,¬â,,¢, but had to be close to, if not exceeding 400 lbs.  I quickly collected my composure and gave her a friendly smile and said hello.
ââ,¬Å"Hi there,ââ,¬Â she said sweetly, ââ,¬Å"how are ya doinââ,¬â,,¢ tonight?ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"Hanging in there, how about you?ââ,¬Â I asked.
ââ,¬Å"Iââ,¬â,,¢ve been better,ââ,¬Â she said with a laugh, ââ,¬Å"that party just isnââ,¬â,,¢t cutting it for me.  Itââ,¬â,,¢s a singles party that my friend dragged me to.  Sheââ,¬â,,¢s having a great time, but thereââ,¬â,,¢s no one in there that looks very appeasing.  Besides, a night on the dance floor is not exactly my forte.ââ,¬Â
   I saw what she meant.  The shirt that she was wearing was drenched in sweat, with drips of perspiration glistening in her cleavage.  It was an amazing sight to see, her enormous breasts were like a magnet to my eyes, and I soon found myself entranced while she was talking to me.
ââ,¬Å"Oh Iââ,¬â,,¢m sorry,ââ,¬Â I managed to stammer out as I quickly diverted my sight from her chest to her eyes, ââ,¬Å"Iââ,¬â,,¢m sure there is the perfect guy for you in there.ââ,¬Â I said comfortingly.
ââ,¬Å"Honey, Iââ,¬â,,¢m not so sure about that.  Iââ,¬â,,¢m 24 years old and Iââ,¬â,,¢ve never been able to hold down a relationship for very long.ââ,¬Â She said as she clearly looked dejected.  ââ,¬Å"But thatââ,¬â,,¢s neither here nor there, I think Iââ,¬â,,¢ma just grab me some snacks that you have in the store, go up to my room and call it an early night.ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"Okay...take your time.ââ,¬Â  I stated quietly.
   She smiled at me then turned around to rummage through the store for her snacks.  She truly had a gorgeous face and smile.  Her dark brown eyes along with her pearly whites completed her charming figure.  This woman had a very cute face, although it was the rest of her body that just left me in awe.  She turned around to reveal a magnificent butt that looked absolutely enormous in the pair of jeans she was wearing.  Along with her tight shirt it left little to the imagination, and it left my mind running.  A few minutes later she returned to the register with a smirk on face as she giggled.  I couldnââ,¬â,,¢t help but be amused myself as I looked down and saw a plethora of snacks and drinks she had laid out.  She had purchased 3 bags of Doritos, 2 Butterfingers, a big bag of Chex Mix, 3 bags of M&Mââ,¬â,,¢s, 2 packages of Twizzlers, 4 Snickers bars, and 3 20 oz. bottles of Pepsi.  Wow, I thought to myself, this woman really loves to eat   The thought of this large woman eating this much really turned me on.  She blushed as she paid for her food, and then asked what time the store was open until.
ââ,¬Å"Midnight,ââ,¬Â I answered nervously, ââ,¬Å"it gets boring her by myself so I wouldnââ,¬â,,¢t mind if you visited again.ââ,¬Â  I blurted out without thinking, causing my face to turn a shade of crimson as well.
ââ,¬Å"Iââ,¬â,,¢ll keep that in mind, take it easy hot stuff.ââ,¬Â  She said, as she then took her bag of goodies and walked out of the store with my eyes fixed on her ass all the way out.
   The woman of my dreams just walked out of my store, and I didnââ,¬â,,¢t even ask what her name was.  For the next two hours I was re-playing the scene that had occurred over and over in my mind.  I fantasized about her eating all of that food while I was there to pleasure her.  I prayed that she would come back down to the store just so I could get another glimpse of her.  It didnââ,¬â,,¢t look hopeful though, the store would only be open for another 45 minutes.  Just as my morale was waning, the store phone rang, and I immediately wondered who could be calling this late.
ââ,¬Å"Hello, gift shop.ââ,¬Â  I answered
ââ,¬Å"Hello....ââ,¬Â cooed the sexy voice from the other end of the line, ââ,¬Å"you remember me donââ,¬â,,¢t you?ââ,¬Â The asked the female voice.
I knew exactly who the stranger was.
ââ,¬Å"Are you the woman who was in the store a few hours ago?ââ,¬Â I asked gently.
ââ,¬Å"You guessed it.ââ,¬Â  She said cheerfully.
ââ,¬Å"What can I do for you?ââ,¬Â  I asked.
ââ,¬Å"Well....I was wondering if you could do me a favor.ââ,¬Â  She sated.
ââ,¬Å"Sure, anything you need.ââ,¬Â  I said, trying not to sound overzealous.
ââ,¬Å"Good to hear   I wanted to know if you could bring some more snacks from your store up to my room, those were so delicious.ââ,¬Â  She said.
ââ,¬Å"No problem, what do you need?ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"Everything you can grab ââ,¬Â  She exclaimed, ââ,¬Å"Iââ,¬â,,¢m starving.  Room 232, hurry please.ââ,¬Â
   She hung up the phone before I could even say another word.  I was in utter shock, I couldnââ,¬â,,¢t believe that she called the store and asked for more food - and for me to bring it to her   It was a dream come true.  I looked at the clock and saw it was 11:30, it looked as though the store would be closing a half an hour early tonight.  I quickly grabbed as many snacks and a few sodas as I could fit into a bag and locked the doors behind me.  Making my way up the stairs, my heart was beating faster than ever.  Outside of Room 232, I took a deep breath and collected myself.  Knocking twice, I then heard her voice from inside.
ââ,¬Å"Who is it?ââ,¬Â  She called.
ââ,¬Å"Itââ,¬â,,¢s Steve from the gift shop.ââ,¬Â I stammered.
ââ,¬Å"Just a moment.ââ,¬Â
   I donââ,¬â,,¢t think Iââ,¬â,,¢ve ever been so nervous before in my life, this was more than I could ever ask for already.  The knob then turned slowly and the door was opened just enough for me to push it open, but not enough for me to see in the room.  I pushed the door open hesitantly and then entered the dimly light room.  I didnââ,¬â,,¢t see the woman at first when I walked in, but I then heard a voice.
ââ,¬Å"Hello Steve...ââ,¬Â Said a sexy voice.
   I turned me head to the direction of her voice and then I saw the most amazing sight I have ever seen on the bed.  There she laid, on top of the covers in only her bra and her panties.  It was too good to be true.  Her enormous belly was cascading over her underwear while her gigantic boobs were just begging to be freed from her bra.  Her thighs were extremely thick too and her silky white skin looked like it was begging for me to taste her.  I couldnââ,¬â,,¢t help but to stare, I was in ecstasy, although Iââ,¬â,,¢m sure I looked like a fool with a big plastic bag of snacks along with the biggest hard-on of my life to boot.
ââ,¬Å"Come here.ââ,¬Â  She instructed nicely as she pat the part of the bed next to where she was lying.
   I cautiously stepped closer to the bed and was in utter disbelief to see this wondrous women taking up almost the whole bed, with her boobs that were surely bigger than my head, and her thighs at least double the width of mine.  I saw the empty rappers of the snacks that she had only two hours before hand cluttered around the room, and to my amazement, they were all empty.
ââ,¬Å"I was so hungry...ââ,¬Â  She giggled, ââ,¬Å"Please feed me more Steve, my big belly needs to feel full.ââ,¬Â
   I looked down at her exposed belly and I couldnââ,¬â,,¢t be anymore turned on.  I then took a candy bar out of the bag and unwrapped it.  I was about to hand it to her until she shook her head and then licked her lips.  Instantly, I knew what she wanted.  I took the candy bar and slowly moved it closer and closer to her mouth.  Her lips met the chocolate and engulfed it her mouth as I help on to the other end.  To my pleasant surprise, she did not chew it right away, but licked it up and down, and then sucked on it as if she was giving it head   I was living a fantasy as a almost lost control of myself right then and there.  She sucked and she licked and then ate the whole thing it a few bites.  This continues for another 5 minutes or so as she ate 8 candy bars.  I was in sheer awe as I saw her chocolate covered lips and her perfect body right in front of me.  She had worked up quite a sweat and she stopped to look at me and we gazed into each otherââ,¬â,,¢s eyes for what seemed like only an instant until before I knew it she grab me kissed me deeply.  It was such a rush as I couldnââ,¬â,,¢t even believe it.
ââ,¬Å"Howââ,¬â,,¢s about I snack on something else?ââ,¬Â  She implied devilishly.
   Before I know it, she had undone my zipper and my hardened cock was released.  She looked at it with wide eyes before indulging her chocolately lips all around my member.  It was pure heaven as I never in a million years thought that a beauty like her would be pleasuring me.  I quickly took action into my own hands as my fingers made their way down her belly.  Caressing and rubbing all of the fat I could manage as she moaned in pleasure with my cock still in her mouth.  I then wasted no time at all as I made my way inside her panties and then my fingers found myself inside of her.  She was dripping wet and moaning like an animal.  A short time later, I couldnââ,¬â,,¢t hold myself back any longer and busted a huge load.  She swallowed it without question and still was moaning in pleasure as I worked my magic, and sure enough very soon she shook and had an orgasm of her own.  Then before I knew it, she seized me, and threw me on the bed right next to her.  I was scared and didnââ,¬â,,¢t know what was going to happen next, but then as I looked up I saw her remove her bra and her underwear and straddled me.  She towered over me and dwarfed me.  She was too much woman to handle, but I was more than ready for the challenge.  She smirked and knew she could do anything she pleased with me.  She sat her naked body on my stomach and ribs which knocked the wind right out of me.
ââ,¬Å"How do you like that kid-o?ââ,¬Â  She asked violently
ââ,¬Å"Never been better.ââ,¬Â  I said smiled while trying to catch some breath.
   She bounced up and down a few times and I was loving every second of it.  Her amazing breasts bounced and then smacked against her belly which drove me crazy.  I was struggling mightily as I might of heard some of my ribs crack.  Despite the sharp pain, I never wanted her to stop.
ââ,¬Å"Now itââ,¬â,,¢s time for the fun part.ââ,¬Â  She proclaimed.
   As quick as she could, she shimmied her way up to my face, and then buried my face between her thighs.  I could barely breathe as I was gasping for breath.
ââ,¬Å"Look at you... you like it down there donââ,¬â,,¢t you?  Cause thatââ,¬â,,¢s where you belong, youââ,¬â,,¢re mine ââ,¬Â  She laughed wickedly.  ââ,¬Å"Eat my pussy and donââ,¬â,,¢t stop until I command you.ââ,¬Â  She instructed
   Without much choice I licked every party of her pussy that I could as she soon started to rock back and forth face fucking me.  She was soaking wet again and she smeared her juices all over her face and she moaned louder and louder while I was doing everything I could with my tongue all while she was beating up my face with her pussy.  The pressure on my face and the rest of my head was immense, I smelled and tasted her hot pussy all over my face.  She rode me for several minutes while I could do nothing but survive.  She didnââ,¬â,,¢t hold anything back as she screamed gloriously while I laid there motionless.  After she came on my face and surely cracked my ribs, I thought she was done for the night, but when I least expected it, she whispered in my ear: ââ,¬Å"I need you inside of me.ââ,¬Â  And without warning she dismounted from my numb face and made her way back down to my cock which she paid close attention to before she placed it in her hot pussy and then slammed down on me.  Being inside of her felt so good, and although I was barely conscious, I made sure to make it as enjoyable as possibly.  Up and down she slammed all of her weight on my cock as I held on to any part of her body I could grab a hold of.  Her titanic sized tits were swinging in my face as I managed to lick and suck them like a wild man.  She rode me without any caution taken as she made me her toy.  She moaned and ran her fingers through her hair but I could barely see it as her boobs and her belly took up my whole vision.  It was safe to say that she fucked my brains out.  It was also safe to say that every body part of mine felt as though it had been steamrolled, but I had no complaints, this was the best night of my life.  Her moans quickly turned to shrieks, as her volume increase, so did the pace as she slammed me harder and harder until we both came at the same time.  The pain was unbearable, I was definitely going to pass out.  But before I could even close my eyes she collapsed right on top of me leaving me no where to go with her belly and her boobs covering me completely.  I had no choice, I could barely breathe but it was just enough.  There she was on top of me, and there I was in amazement of what just had happened.  Too good to be true.  She was soon snoring loudly in about 2 minutes as I closed me eyes trying to make the pain away.  I would never forget what took place that night, but about 15 minutes later she awoke and startled my as she shook me.
ââ,¬Å"Steve! Wake up!ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"Whatââ,¬â,,¢s wrong?ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"Iââ,¬â,,¢m hungry....ââ,¬Â She said with a naughty grin.  ââ,¬Å"By the way, my name is Joanne.  Itââ,¬â,,¢s a pleasure to meet you...and Iââ,¬â,,¢m sorry if I crushed you before, sometimes the animal in me comes out and I cant help it.ââ,¬Â
ââ,¬Å"Donââ,¬â,,¢t even worry about it.ââ,¬Â I said.
   I spent the rest of the night feeding her and gladly being her toy.  It was the greatest night of my life, I had fallen in love with a goddess.

Great first effort.  Good imagery, felt as if I was really there.  Great subject matter.  Good story, great writing, great author!!  Keep up the good work!!

For a first timer,your story was great. Will there be another?

I have started another story but recently I've been getting a little sidetracked, but I intend on finishing it as soon as possible so stay tuned.

Good story. Read one like it befor :-[e.