Great story. When telling a story proof read what you wrote.
At the begining,
I go ahead and give the nights money to the manager so after this last one I can head straight home.
But then at the end,
The next night at 7pm I got to work again and the manager asked for the last deliveries pizza money from the night before and I had totaly forgotten to get paid so I had to pay him out of my pocket and act like she paid me.
It kind of messes the whole thing up, other then that its was really good, can't wait for another if your planning on it.
At the begining,
I go ahead and give the nights money to the manager so after this last one I can head straight home.
But then at the end,
The next night at 7pm I got to work again and the manager asked for the last deliveries pizza money from the night before and I had totaly forgotten to get paid so I had to pay him out of my pocket and act like she paid me.
It kind of messes the whole thing up, other then that its was really good, can't wait for another if your planning on it.