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(this is my first story, its not too vulgar but very odd, hope you enjoii)

Ashley was a medium height woman who weighed newehere from 380 to 420, she was a big girl to most of the crowd. But she had an akward power, that couldn;t be denied. A person who angered her would be punished, an eye for an eye.

She was at the bar sitting in a booth drinking alot of beer and finishing off some pizzas and large baskets of wings, two very rude gentleman waltz over to her and have the stupidity to make a comment about how she can eat so much. Now ashleys power is most of the time not controlled by her. It does things for her without her knowing. SO she discards these nasty comments and continues eating. A few minutes later the two men find themselves in a akward place, on a cheese pizza, they look up to see they have been shrunked to barely an inch in size. Ashley is like any good eater she doesnt pay attention to whats shes doin when she eats so she doesnt even know that the two guys are sitting on her meal. Slowly but surely like Russian roulette the peices start narrowing down in quantity, as she consumes at a high rate. The men get anxious and start to scream but with her chewing and the sounds of a bar ther disformed voices dont make it past eachother. oNE SLICE is left, they are sitting on it not able to move cus the sticky cheese melted them to the pizza. wiggiling they try to escape, but to no use they are picked up by ashley. She slowly eats the pizza one bit at a time. They are panicing now, hoping and praying this is a dream. But Ashleys hungry stomach could not stand eating little peiaces, she had gotten a hunger wave. She had a compulsion to eat everything she could as fast as possible. finally she tooked a giant chomp getting the two men and the delicious pizza into her hungry mouth, she quickly swallowed, and the men had been given the ultimate punishment. They said she ate toomuch so their punishment was to be eaten, (its just a rouph draft pls tell me wat u think, ther will be more on ashley)

I'm curious as to what she can do.

alot, but this is just the first to the saga, she can basically turn people into things that will seek revenge on them, the punishment suits the crime in her case.....very mysterious but squashing will come soon....